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With unaccountable hurts in both mentally and physically, the monster leaded a vagrant life. He suffered unbearable hungry and cold. And he went through mostly sufferings in the world.
One day, the monster came across Frankenstein's hometown, Geneva. Suddenly, a woman came into his view. It was Elizabeth that was reading in the garden. She was an angel, and the monster full in love with her deeply. With the strong feeling of love, the monster forgot all the abuse he had gotten. From then on, the monster waited the appearance of Elizabeth everyday.

This is a piece of drama made by myself, adapting from Frankenstein. I want it to be more native and more simple. And there are some grammatical mistakes that I don't know how to correct them.

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With unaccountable hurts in both mentally and physically, the monster leaded a vagrant life. He suffered unbearable hungry and cold. And he went through mostly sufferings in the world.
      One day, the monster came across Frankenstein's hometown, Geneva. Suddenly, a woman came into his view. It was Elizabeth that was reading in the garden. She was an angel, and the monster full in love with her deeply. With the strong feeling of love, the monster forgot all the abuse he had gotten. From then on, the monster waited the appearance of Elizabeth everyday.

This is a piece of drama made by myself, adapting from Frankenstein. I want it to be more native and more simple. And there are some grammatical mistakes that I don't know how to correct them.
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