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@s0upx0n: thank you very much.

Could I have another question?


Now, my sister and I grow order and stronger, and the adults are getting order and order, they cannot cope with so many chores after they complete their jobs during the day.
My system and I both decide to share the chores in order to ease their burden.

Therefore, I chaired a family meeting to have a chores allocation. Since we are still young, and we don’t know how to cook. Therefore, I choose the cleaning, mopping, wash dishes, doing the laundry. There is no special gift required for doing these things.

While I am doing the chores¸ I don’t take it as a monotonous and tiresome work. Instead, it is not only a great time to reflect on what I have accomplished today but also I plan what to do later. Sometimes, I take the advantage of this time to recite new English vocabulary, or chat with my parents and my sister.

Actually, I do learn a lot from doing chores. When I was young, what I knew is that adults were too busy to accompany us. I cannot understand why they were so busy. After I do the chores personly, I begin to understand that doing chores is a time- consuming and energy-consuming job. Therefore, I have to create some strategies to cope with it to take advantage of time usage. Moreover, I learn to chair a meeting although it is only a small scale of meeting. I learn to allocate time and mission.

To to continued

@s0upx0n: Looking forward to your corrections .

Thank you in advance.

@s0upx0n Thank you very much

I would like to end my composition like
To sum up, there are many benefits doing household chores. Hope everyone can enjoying doing it.

Is it ok ?