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Güncellenme tarihi:
30 Haz 2017
- Portekizce (Brezilya)
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İngilizce (Birleşik Krallık)
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İtalyanca
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Galce
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Help!
Could you tell me if my sentences sound natural? What would you change?
1 "The villagers traditionally chose the village square as the spot in which the parade would come to a halt. Everyone had to put their shoulder to the wheel(or should I say 'do their bit'?) by setting the tables, hanging up(or should I use lining up??) flags across the square, making the bonfire..."/
2 "However there was a young lad who was like to be idle and (or should I say lazy?) he didn't have the slightest intention of lending a hand when asked to and the few times he did, it was in a half-hearted way, grumbling and dragging his feet. He used to say, cheeky as he was, 'I'm not an octopus!'.
Help!
Could you tell me if my sentences sound natural? What would you change?
1 "The villagers traditionally chose the village square as the spot in which the parade would come to a halt. Everyone had to put their shoulder to the wheel(or should I say 'do their bit'?) by setting the tables, hanging up(or should I use lining up??) flags across the square, making the bonfire..."/
2 "However there was a young lad who was like to be idle and (or should I say lazy?) he didn't have the slightest intention of lending a hand when asked to and the few times he did, it was in a half-hearted way, grumbling and dragging his feet. He used to say, cheeky as he was, 'I'm not an octopus!'.
Could you tell me if my sentences sound natural? What would you change?
1 "The villagers traditionally chose the village square as the spot in which the parade would come to a halt. Everyone had to put their shoulder to the wheel(or should I say 'do their bit'?) by setting the tables, hanging up(or should I use lining up??) flags across the square, making the bonfire..."/
2 "However there was a young lad who was like to be idle and (or should I say lazy?) he didn't have the slightest intention of lending a hand when asked to and the few times he did, it was in a half-hearted way, grumbling and dragging his feet. He used to say, cheeky as he was, 'I'm not an octopus!'.
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- İngilizce (Birleşik Krallık)
I think 'Do their bit' sounds better than put their shoulder to the wheel and 'lazy' sounds better as well. Otherwise I think it sounds good
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