I went to Yokohama two weeks ago.
The purpouse of the trip is to celeblate of my father-in-laws birthday.

So my brother-in-law who lives in Tokyo planed the trip.
In Yokohama, we went to the Hara Model Train Museum.

The Museum exhibits many Model Trains made by Nobutaro Hara.
My father-in-law was very excited, because he is a train-buff or rainspotter.

My son was also very excited, because there were many Thomas and his Friends.
He crazy about Thomas the engine.

I'm not so interested in Model Trains, but I enjoyed too.
It is worth seeing! bu doğru görünüyor mu?

​​I went to Yokohama two weeks ago.
The purpouse of the trip "was"to celeblate ""my father-in-laws birthday.

""My brother-in-law who lives in Tokyo planed the trip.
In Yokohama, we went to the Hara Model Train Museum.

The Museum exhibits many Model Trains made by Nobutaro Hara.
My father-in-law was very excited""because he is a train-buff or rainspotter.

My son was also very excited""because there were many Thomas and his Friends.(usually you would clarify what this is, or that it was an exhibit)
He crazy about Thomas the engine.

I'm not "very"interested in Model Trains, but I enjoyed "it" too.
It is worth seeing!


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