I'm ryo. How are you?
I'm studying in English.
but I'm still a biginner in English because it's so difficult.
I heard that good studying matter is doing jouraling.
So I started today.
I'm living in Shimane in Japan.
but I was born in Fukuoka.
Fukuoka is very urban.
Shimane is very county.
I came to Shimane in order to work.
I’m very disappointed,but Shimane is good place than I thought.
Shimane is very quite because a few people and no noises.
However if when I go to my parents home,I have to drive long time.
There is transfer my company.
I hope I’m going to go to near place at the my parents home.

Thanks a lot for correcting my English. bu doğru görünüyor mu?

I'm ryoRyo.

I'm studying in English.

butBut I'm still a biginnerbeginner in English because it's so difficult.

I heard that a good studying mattertechnique is doing jouraling.

I'm living in Shimane, in Japan.

butBut I was born in Fukuoka.

I’m was very disappointed, but Shimane is gooda better place than I thought.

Shimane is very quite because athere are few people and no noises.

However if when I go to my parents home, I have to drive long time.

There is transfer opportunity my company.

I hope I’m going to go tosomewhere near place at the my parents home.

I'm ryoRyo.

I'm studying in English.

but I'm still a biginnerbeginner in English because it's so difficult. (note: you don't have to repeat "in English" here!)

I heard that a good studyingway matterto study is (by) doing jouralingjournaling . .(alt: by keeping/writing a journal)

I'm living in Shimane in Japan. (alt: I live in)

Shimane is very countycountry.

I came to Shimane in order to work. (alt: I came to Shimane for work)

I’m very disappointed, but Shimane is gooda better place than I thought.

Shimane is very quite because athere are few people and no noisesnoise.

However if when I go to my parents home, I have to drive long time. (alt: However, if I want to visit my parents, ..)

There is a transfer option with my company.

I hope I’m going to go to neara/some place atnear the my parentsparent's home. (alt: my parent's house)

I'm ryoRyo. (Names are always capitalized)

I'm studying in English.

but I'm still a biginner in English because it's so difficult.

I heard that a good studyingway matterto study is doing jouralingjournaling.

I'm living in Shimane, Japan, but I was born in JapanFukuoka.

but I was born in Fukuoka.

Fukuoka is very urban, while Shimane is very country.

Shimane is very county.

I’m very disappointed with it, but Shimane is gooda better place than I thought.

ShimaneIt’s is very quite because athere are few people and no noises.

However, if when I go to my parents home, I have to drive a long timeway.

ThereIf there is transfer at my company, I hope to go to near place at the my parents home.

I hope I’m going to go to near place at the my parents home.