- Japonca
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İngilizce (ABD)
There has been a lot of public discussion on whether or not democratic activity should promote the spread of democracy to nondemocratic nations. I believe the idea of democracy should be prevailed to nondemocratic countries for the following reasons.
First, people living in nondemocratic nations cannot express what they think freely. Generally speaking, nondemocratic countries tend to restrict their citizens from expressing their thought in order to defend nation’s authority. However, the right of freedom of speech is one of the most important rights for human beings. Governments must not infringe this right.
Secondly, economy would stagnate in nondemocratic nations. Nondemocratic countries do not introduce capitalism, which let companies not to develop more useful products since they do not need to compete with each other in the countries. As a result, they will loose power to compete with other countries and decline their economy.
bu doğru görünüyor mu?
First, people living in nondemocratic nations cannot express what they think freely. Generally speaking, nondemocratic countries tend to restrict their citizens from expressing their thought in order to defend nation’s authority. However, the right of freedom of speech is one of the most important rights for human beings. Governments must not infringe this right.
Secondly, economy would stagnate in nondemocratic nations. Nondemocratic countries do not introduce capitalism, which let companies not to develop more useful products since they do not need to compete with each other in the countries. As a result, they will loose power to compete with other countries and decline their economy.
bu doğru görünüyor mu?
This is an exercise essay for the English grammar exam.
On the day of the test, I will not be allowed to check any website or books and I will need to write three reasons to support my answer, which must be no more than 200 words and must be completed within 30 minutes.
I wrote this under the same conditions as the real thing, so I was not able to provide sufficient evidence.
Also, since I am not good at English, I prioritize the English I am comfortable writing rather than the opinions I really have.
- İngilizce (ABD)
Birazcık yanlış
There has been a lot of public discussion on whether or not democratic activity should promote the spread of democracy to nondemocratic nations.
I believe the idea of democracy should be prevailedpromoted toin nondemocratic countries for the following reasons.:
I believe the idea of democracy should be prevailedpromoted toin nondemocratic countries for the following reasons.:
First, people living in nondemocratic nations cannot express what they think freely.
Generally speaking, nondemocratic countriesnation-states tend to restrict their citizenscitizen’s fromexpression expressingof theirthoughts thought in order to defend nation’sgovernment authority.
Generally speaking, nondemocratic countriesnation-states tend to restrict their citizenscitizen’s fromexpression expressingof theirthoughts thought in order to defend nation’sgovernment authority.
However, the right of freedom of speech is one of the most important rights for human beings.
Governments must not infringe upon this right.
Governments must not infringe upon this right.
Secondly, economyeconomies would stagnate in nondemocratic nations.
Secondly, economyeconomies would stagnate in nondemocratic nations.
Nondemocratic countries do not introduce capitalism, which letcauses companies to not to develop more useful products since they do not need to compete with each other in the countriesdomestically.
Nondemocratic countries do not introduce capitalism, which letcauses companies to not to develop more useful products since they do not need to compete with each other in the countriesdomestically.
As a result, they will loose powerinternational tocompetitiveness competeand withtheir othereconomy countrieswill and decline their economy.
As a result, they will loose powerinternational tocompetitiveness competeand withtheir othereconomy countrieswill and decline their economy.
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- Japonca
My teacher gave me this topic, so actually I’m exactly not sure about nondemocratic nations.
I wrote this essay assuming North Korea as a non-democratic country.
HiNative sayesinde, yazılarınızı öğrendiğiniz dili ana dil olarak konuşan kullanıcılara ücretsiz olarak düzelttirebilirsiniz ✍️✨.
- 私の趣味はたくさんあります。は I have a lot of hobby. で合っていますか？
- Bunu İngilizce (ABD) da nasıl dersiniz? I feel a lot better
- How can I have a lot of English words ?
Bu sembol nedir?
Dil Seviyesi sembolü ilgilendiği dillerdeki yeterliğinizi gösterir. Dil Seviyenizi seçmek kullanıcılara anlaşılması kolay cevap yazmalarında yardımcı olur.
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Acemi
Hedef dildeki soruların cevaplarını anlaması zor.
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Acemi-Deneyimli
Basit sorular yapma kabiliyeti var. Basit cevapları anlayabilir.
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Deneyimli
Her türlü genel soru sorabilecek kapasitede. Biraz uzun cevapları anlayabilir.
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Uzman
Uzun karmaşık cevapları anlayabilecek kapasitede.
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