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2 Şub 2017
- Japonca
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Feb 2
I bought a GoPro in Amazon today.
The GoPro is a digital video camera specialized in photographing an animation of various active sports.
It enables to take pictures in verious scenes because it resists a shock, it has water resistance and pictures are good.
However, it's a fault to have a bad durability of a battery.
I'm going to use it as a selfie camera.
I cannot wait to receive it.
I don't think my sentences flow very smoothly and there are some mistakes. Please correct anything that doesn't seem natural.
Feb 2
I bought a GoPro in Amazon today.
The GoPro is a digital video camera specialized in photographing an animation of various active sports.
It enables to take pictures in verious scenes because it resists a shock, it has water resistance and pictures are good.
However, it's a fault to have a bad durability of a battery.
I'm going to use it as a selfie camera.
I cannot wait to receive it.
I don't think my sentences flow very smoothly and there are some mistakes. Please correct anything that doesn't seem natural.
I bought a GoPro in Amazon today.
The GoPro is a digital video camera specialized in photographing an animation of various active sports.
It enables to take pictures in verious scenes because it resists a shock, it has water resistance and pictures are good.
However, it's a fault to have a bad durability of a battery.
I'm going to use it as a selfie camera.
I cannot wait to receive it.
I don't think my sentences flow very smoothly and there are some mistakes. Please correct anything that doesn't seem natural.
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- İngilizce (ABD)
I bought a GoPro *on Amazon today.
The GoPro is a digital video camera specialized in photographing *and *filming various active sports.
It enables *one to take pictures in *various scenes because it *is shock resistant*, it *is water *resistant and *the picture *quality *is good.
However, *one fault *is it has* a battery *with poor durability*.
I'm going to use it as a selfie camera.
I cannot wait to receive it.
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- Japonca
- İngilizce (ABD)
@takuya111 Your original version is still clear and easy to understand. あなたの英語は上手です!
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- İngilizce (Birleşik Krallık)
- İngilizce (ABD)
I would write:
Feb 2nd.
I bought a GoPro on Amazon today.
The GoPro is a digital video camera specialized in photographing highspeed sports.
It (enables/allows) you to take pictures in various scenes as it resistant to shock, water and the pictures are good.
However, it has a very short battery life.
I'm going to use it as a selfie camera.
I cannot wait to receive it.
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