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There are a few reasons why people do not like Facebook.

           First of all, people are afraid of their personal information to be exposed to the world. Since Facebook required their real name, many users may feel uncomfortable. Additionally, some people may fear other users to post pictures of their family and friends. Furthermore, by looking at the pictures posted under their real name, other users may potentially find out their home address. For these reasons, many people may fear their personal information to be leaked (Much tech, 2019).

          Secondly, one of disadvantages of Facebook is fake profiles. Some people create a fake profile and attack someone that they don't like. Moreover, those fake profiles are being used to harass other people by telling strange contents or chat with someone they dislike by pretending to be other people (Much tech, 2019).

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Please correct gramar mistakes

There are a few reasons why people do not like Facebook.

First of all, people are afraid of their personal information to be exposed to the world. Since Facebook required their real name, many users may feel uncomfortable. Additionally, some people may fear other users to post pictures of their family and friends. Furthermore, by looking at the pictures posted under their real name, other users may potentially find out their home address. For these reasons, many people may fear their personal information to be leaked  (Much tech, 2019).

Secondly, one of disadvantages of Facebook is fake profiles. Some people create a fake profile and attack someone that they don't like. Moreover, those fake profiles are being used to harass other people by telling strange contents or chat with someone they dislike by pretending to be other people (Much tech, 2019).

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There are a few reasons why people do not like Facebook.

First of all, people are afraid of their personal information being exposed to the world. Since Facebook requires their real name, many users feel uncomfortable. Additionally, some people may fear other users will post pictures of their family and friends. Furthermore, by looking at the pictures posted under their real name, other users may potentially find out their home address. For these reasons, many people may fear their personal information to be leaked.  (Much tech, 2019).

Secondly, one of the disadvantages of Facebook is fake profiles. Some people create fake profiles and attack people  that they don't like. Moreover, those fake profiles are being used to harass other people by saying strange things or chatting with someone they dislike by pretending to be other people.(alternatively, called catfishing) (Much tech, 2019).

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