Writing No. 7 (Goal: 10)
I don't want to wear makeup

Doing makeup is very bothering. It takes 30 minutes every morning so my 30 minutes is gone compared to those who don't put on any makeup.

Although I'm not keen on doing that, I have to do it because it is one of the unwritten rules for women.
If I go to work putting nothing on my face, every collegue would point at me and regard me as a stranger.

Only Those who have pure skin or own big companies like CEOs wouldn't be attacked by others.
I have no idea yet when I can earn back my lost 30 minutes per a day. bu doğru görünüyor mu?

Doing makeup is very bothersome.

It takes 30 minutes every morning so I have lost 30 minutes compared to those who don't wear makeup.
(not wrong but sounds a bit awkward)

If I went to work putting nothing on my face, every collegue would point at me and treat me like a stranger.
(past tense before would)
(a little awkward.)

Only those who have clear skin or own big companies like CEOs wouldn't be ostracised by others.
(skin isn't usually called pure)
(to ostracise means to treat someone like they are a stranger/don't exist/don't belong. they ignore you and are unfriendly)

I have no idea when I can earn back my lost 30 minutes per day.
(or just "lost time")

(I left out sentences that were fine)