Unfortunately, communication can’t teach me how to create attractive content in the aspect of inner meaning, which definitely confuses me. Communication just tells me, content like what is appealing. Only master rules or models is not enough to write the excellent content. The ways to solve this problem are reading more, experiencing more, supplying knowledge from other subject, such as literature, history, philosophy and anthropology. I am looking forward to enriching my life experience, broadening my knowledge scope to stimulate my inspirations. International exchange program can give me chance to satisfy my demand listed above.
To conclude, I submit my application with deep thoughts and great desire. I am hoping to get this honor. bu doğru görünüyor mu?

Hi! Your second one is very good! I have made a couple of changes :)


Communication is an interdisciplinary subject which teaches us how to gain strong communication effect with models and theories from many other fields. But none of the teaching denies the fact that content which is dull and inferior has no possibility to become wide spread.

Unfortunately, communications ignore the aspect of content producing. It’s similar to how a film director guides the people to do the right things, but he still fails to make a good film because of his poor screenwriter.
Understanding the rules or models is not enough to write excellent content.
I consider that the ways to solve this problem are; reading more, experiencing more and using knowledge from other subjects such as literature, history, philosophy and anthropology. I am looking forward to enriching my life experiences and also broadening the scope of my knowledge. The International exchange program will allow me the opportunity to get the skills I need.
It would be an honor to be considered for the international exchange program. I look forward to hearing from you.