Bunu İngilizce (ABD) da nasıl dersiniz? "My favorite subject is art because I love creating more and more works to express a thought or a feeling during the lesson. Besides, I am happy that if people can get to know me through my works. That’s why I love Art." Are these weird?

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“My favorite subject is art because I love creating works to express a thought or a feeling during a session (如果你一个人自己做)/during class. “ (during a lesson sounds like you have a private teacher like piano lessons).

“More and more” isn’t needed. It sounds like if you said ”我最喜欢吃的东西是小笼包. 我很喜欢跟朋友吃越来越小笼包.” (It sounds wrong. :). We know if you do

(Besides doesn’t work well here. It’s more for: “I can’t go, and besides, I don’t want to go anyway.” It’s for sentences where you give more explanation about first part.)

“I also like that people can get to know me through my work (工作）/works （你做的东西）.”