Questions about example sentences with, and the definition and usage of "Mstakes"

A: I wake up at 7 o'clock every morning. Then I start walking FOR half an hour, because it is a good habit. After I finish MY walk, I have breakfast. Then I get ready for my COLLEGE. I like to spend my SPARE time drawing, or HANGING out with my friends .


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This is very good. Just some very small changes. I tried to capitalize the changed or added words, but only to make them easier to see. The changes that I couldn't capitalize are explained here:

7 o'oclock - this should be 7 o'clock, so you just had an extra 'o'

...every morning, then I start... -- I changed this to be two separate sentences here.

..start walking FOR half an hour, because... -- it needs this word to feel like a complete sentence

After I finish MY walk, I have... -- it needs this word to feel like a complete sentence

"collage" is a form of art where you put a lot of smaller pictures together in a large display, you want "college" which is the school meaning. Very similar in spelling.

"spare" is the correct spelling

To fit the rest of the sentence's grammar, "hanging out with my friends" is better this time. For example: "I hang out with my friends. / I like to hang out with my friends. / I like hanging out with my friends. / I like to spend my spare time drawing or hanging out with my friends."

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These are all very small changes. You did a very good job on most of it. Very nicely done. Just keep practicing! =)