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Q: Hello, Anthony, This is Rory from the marketing department. I’m writing this email to reply to your request.

I think you are concerned about how to sell downtown, I have several suggestions that you could do for that event.
1) Put a notification on the company’s website, by doing so the more customers get the chance to enjoy the event.
2) Distribute simple flyers to the people who come to the mall in the main hall in the upcoming party on April 20th. That way people who are interested in this event may ask some questions.
While communicating with them, you can add those people to a list. So that you can send free coupons.

I guess the second suggestion would work well because they are the people who are already interested in that event so they will join the event once you send more benefits for them.


I hope it will help you. If you have any questions please contact me.

Sincerely, bu doğru görünüyor mu?
A: × I’m writing this email to reply to your request.
✓ I’m writing this email because... (continued sentence below)

× I think you are concerned about how to sell downtown, I have several suggestions that you could do for that event.
✓ ...I know you are concerned about how to sell downtown, so I have two suggestions about what you could do for that event.

× 1) Put a notification on the company’s website, by doing so the more customers get the chance to enjoy the event.
✓ 1) Put a notification on the company’s website so that more customers are aware of the event.

× 2) Distribute simple flyers to the people who come to the mall in the main hall in the upcoming party on April 20th.
✓ 2) Distribute flyers to the people who come to the party on April 20th.*

× That way people who are interested in this event may ask some questions.
✓ That way, people who are interested in this event have a chance to ask some questions.

× While communicating with them, you can add those people to a list.
✓ You can add those people to a list, too, ... (continued sentence below)

× So that you can send free coupons.
✓ ...so that you can send them free coupons.

× I guess the second suggestion would work well because they are the people who are already interested in that event so they will join the event once you send more benefits for them.
✓ I think the second suggestion would work best because those are the people who are already interested in the event, so they will be more likely to join.

× I hope it will help you.
✓ I hope these ideas will help you.

× If you have any questions please contact me.
✓ If you have any questions, please contact me.

I re-worded a lot of it to make it more concise. Let me know what you think!
*I wasn't 100% sure about this one.

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